Some people say thai too much attetion and resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?
Some people think that paying attention and investing money to protect wild animals and birds are not worth. Personally, I completely disagree with this point of view.
There are many reasons why wild animals and birds need more attention and resources. Firstly, nowadays, the number of extincted animals are increasing. There are many people still hunting elephants for their teeth or killing tiger to make leather. It means that the resouces spent on protecting animals are not enough and people have not seriously concerned about this prolem. So that is neccessary to raise more awareness and invest more resources to protect wild animals and birds.
Secondly, protecting wild animals and birds is essential for human existing. For instance, protecting rain forests where many animals and birds live not only ensure the environment for them to continue existing but also help people prevent floods and regulate the air quality. Therefore, the protection of wild animals and birds is a good way tho ensure the living of human and it is worth investing resources and human power.
In conclusion, I believe that we need to pay more attention and spend more resources to protect wild animals and birds.
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| 2019-08-31 | Saeedeamani | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the protection of wild animals and birds is a good way tho ensure the living of h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14795918367 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50743895322 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8504230595 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7272727273 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276580493109 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117898091256 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547485436475 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187068200096 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357121691453 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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