Some people say thath the best preparation for life is learning to be co-operative. Other take the opposite view and say that learning to be competitive is the best preparation. Tell which one you agree with and explain why.
Since we was a child, we was taught to be competitive as to take the highest rank in the class and those lesson come along with us untill we grew up. But as soon as we integrated in society did we learn that cooperate which complete ourselves. From my point of view I would avocade that cooperative is the most necessary element for achievement.
On one hand, competitive encourage us to be independent and become the best among surrounded people. To reach that aim, people put themselves under pressure and they always keep moving towards glory. But sometime it become a negative effects. People who obsessed with successful, some would willing to do illegal things. Whatever it take, they would find rival’s weakness to break them down. It is clearly to see that, a competitive life quite uncomfortable and harsh to them.
In other hand, as a proverb goes “ two heads are better than one” which show us that working together would obtain more successful and easier. Obviously, no one is perfect and that why people should join a hand to cover each other weakness. For example, to deal with a problem, a group of people with different experience and knowledge, they would come out with many ideas. This is undoubted that the co-operation between member have more advantages than a person working alone. however, the more ideas the more difficult to agree on a opinion.
With the view of both sides considered, I think that people should learn to be competitive and co-operative to adapt any condition that they meet in the future. Be competitive to perfect oneself and be co-operative to perfect others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this lesson' or 'those lessons'?
Suggestion: this lesson; those lessons
... take the highest rank in the class and those lesson come along with us untill we grew up. B...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st necessary element for achievement. On one hand, competitive encourage us to...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...p moving towards glory. But sometime it become a negative effects. People who obsessed...
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Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...lling to do illegal things. Whatever it take, they would find rival's weakness ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quite uncomfortable and harsh to them. In other hand, as a proverb goes '...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble and harsh to them. In other hand, as a proverb goes ' two heads are b...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...advantages than a person working alone. however, the more ideas the more difficult to a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...re ideas the more difficult to agree on a opinion. With the view of both si...
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Suggestion:
...more difficult to agree on a opinion. With the view of both sides considered, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and be co-operative to perfect others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, as to, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88768115942 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72634033679 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3030087608 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271498415392 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752705737758 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561931128646 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15414105571 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516401213474 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.