Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about his opinion?
The amount of attention to wild animals and birds always has been a controversial argument. Some people believe that it is too much and others are opposite of them. I agree with second group and in this essay describe the reasons.
To begin with, keep the wildlife is essential issue for all of human generation and we should do all the best to transfer all of the species without change to the next generations. In the other words, extinction of rare animals like Pandas is a danger problem which may be occurred in the case of inappropriate protection. Another reason belonging to attention to wildlife is that from authentic approach which dictate to us our responsibility to help other species to endure minimum repercussion because of human activities that endangers them. For instance, global warming and ice melting due to human need to more energy will lead to significant changes in the life of animals like Penguins and polar bears in the Poles.
On the other hand, some people think we have more important subjects rather than life of animals and try to protect them. They say that priority of animals is lower than human and we should consume the main attention to the humanity problems. For example when we have a lot of hungry kids, it is not logical to assign resources to animals.
As conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the necessity of attention to people issues but each subject should be evaluate independently too. In my idea the attention and resources to protect of animals is not too much and I believe that we are responsible to keep them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...d we should do all the best to transfer all of the species without change to the next gene...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'evaluated'?
Suggestion: evaluated
...eople issues but each subject should be evaluate independently too. In my idea the atten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78021978022 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71209741095 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7530259685 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242376505054 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954422876044 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818821359776 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174511646433 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951048637746 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.