Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true is the statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
As the demand of creation for human is increasing, tourism has become one of the most developed industries in the world. However, along with the rapid growth, many people criticize that tourism caused various negative effects on the host country. Although this statement may be true to some extent, but I personally think that tourism has its two-sided impact, meaning this industry can bring people both benefits and drawbacks.
In terms of economy, tourism contributes to the economic growth of the local thanks to the tourist’s consumption of local products. Indeed, when travelling, tourists are likely to spend much money on food, accommodation, souvenir gifts, etc., helping to add a significant increase in local people’s income. Moreover, tourism assists the country in handling with unemployment by creating a variety of jobs opportunities. People can find plenty of well-paid jobs related to this industry such as tour guide, tourist service officer, etc. Also, tourism facilitates the culture exchange between visitors and local people. The indigenous ones can learn new languages, make new friends and get exposed to different traditions, leading to a deep understanding and a bond relationship between different countries in the world. However, the rise in the number of people travelling can damage the environment and destroy the pristine landscape of tourist attractions because of the garbage from tourists as well as the excessive exploit of the local authority. More importantly, the regular exposure to different cultural identities can make the local lose their own one.
It is crucial that tourists have to take action to minimize the harmful impact on the places they travel to. They should be aware of keeping all the properties of tourist attractions intact and not littering along their tour. They also have to respect local people as well as their customs and traditions. Only by giving a hand to preserve the host country’s culture and environment that tourists can enjoy fully their travelling as well as reduce negative effects of tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82505336796 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8601861353 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422843322587 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125934459904 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802466673464 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269167382843 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00212717221605 0.056905535591 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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