Write a compare/ contrast essays about two types of housing of students
Accommodation seems to be very student’s concern as they enter university. Two of the most popular options now are living in a dorm and living in their own home, which are vastly different in many noticeable aspects including the level of privacy, practical experience and access to school’s facilities.
To begin with, though living on campus and at home both provide students with necessary personal space, the extent of privacy differs significantly. Living at dormitory means they have to share your living space and facilities with others instead of having your own room. From this point, living in such a shared room like a dorm is quite less comfortable than living with parents. However, in terms of experience, living apart from parents helps students explore themselves as well as develop crucial skills that will never be acquired if they live at home. Specifically, as they live with strangers, they can learn to communicate, build good relationships and manage their own life without preference from their family. Whereas, living in their own house, where their parents cater for all of their needs, will restrict their long term development. Additionally, easy approach to university will be a huge advantage of living on campus. For example, when students forget to bring anything, they can come back to the dorm to take it and still arrive at their classroom on time. Meanwhile, living at home means students have to commute from and to school, which not only costly but also inconvenient.
In conclusion, these two types of housing vary in lots of ways. To find out which kind of accommodation suits the best, all the differences and personal conditions should be taken into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14946619217 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8512068194 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615658362989 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7242430798 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0316479452637 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0206316381891 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620093973646 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515829316691 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535247462238 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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