Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the era of rapid urbanization, there appear more and more skyscrapers in big cities. Many people think that these impressive buildings are a vital feature of a city. However, others believe that improving healthcare and education should be the investing priority instead of these building. I personally agree with the latter view.
On the one hand, people believe that special and giant buildings create the identity of cities, contributing to the development of tourism and economy. For example, the image of Eiffel Tower is always considered as the symbol of Paris. This great architecture also makes itself become a tourist attraction, which promotes the national tourism. Also, the fact that tourists are likely to spend money on local products such as souvenir gifts, food and accommodation, etc. leads to a significant increase in the local people’s income and the economic growth. Another benefit of building large buildings is that it can help to solve the problem of living space in big city. As the population grows dramatically, housing in metropolitan cities is extremely expensive. Tall buildings are supposed to be the solution to this problem as it can provide citizens with large capacity without taking much public space.
On the other hand, ones against investing in giant buildings believe that the quality of schools and hospitals, which is the directly beneficial to residents, should be focused. Instead of spending a huge amount of money just to impress foreign tourists, this budget can be allocated to upgrade school facilities and build healthcare centers in remote areas or wherever in need. It is more important for people to get access to these systems for their basic need. For instance, if there is an outbreak of a disease, it is not beautiful buildings but hospitals that save human from suffering.
In conclusion, although large and attractive buildings are an essential part of cities, I am strongly believe that healthcare and education are the most important to invest in the modern society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...essential part of cities, I am strongly believe that healthcare and education are the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20364741641 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79226276843 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4626031275 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.705882353 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318947033222 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860753997249 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625798709335 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182495438473 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688824315094 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.