Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, it is not uncommon to encounter people constantly attached to mobile devices rather than broadsheet newspaper for latest and breaking news. As a result, this ubiquitous phenomenon intrigues a number of individuals to claim that printed newspaper is no longer necessary for the community. Though I partially comprehend certain reasons for such conviction, I strongly believe that perhaps newspaper is not supremely prevalent, it is definitely far from being trivial.
When taking into consideration, online newspaper apparently transcends the conventional material in terms of efficiency and diversity. First, advanced technology has allowed people to access current affairs under no restriction of time and space. This can be seen from the modern stereotype of the young who would likely prefer reading on their gadgets while walking home from school or work than tediously confine themselves on a seat, carrying the bulky sheets of papers. Secondly, in addition of its superiority, online presses possesses a large repertoire of numerous websites in favor of accessibility for readers to not only scrutinize the reliability of the given information, but also obtain divergent perceptions towards several controversial social issues. Besides, high-speed internet reception has also contributed a crucial role to bring forward the robust predisposition of web-based reading, whereby its journal articles are way faster to be disseminated than the printed form.
Excellent online press as foresaid, it is entirely unnecessary to halt the printed newspaper for quite a number of reasons. Above all, tangible newspaper has been on earth for nearly two centuries and by far a mere hobby to billions of the population. That is to say eliminating newsprint can represent a destructive influence on individuals worldwide regarding both gratification and employment. Particularly, it would be a tragedy for Western inhabitants to whom newspapers is considered as not only an indispensable habit and a fact of culture, but also the most effective ways of exploring temporary events which are circulating throughout their society. Coupled with the loss of the aesthetic human practice, the termination of the press industry will undoubtedly entail with hundreds of unemployed specialists in this sector as well as put an end to the so-called journalism. Last but not least, newspaper itself is lower grade material which has been recycled several times, not to mention the fact that old magazines or tabloids are widely salvaged in certain everyday activities. As an example, many homemakers, instead of wasting a roll of paper towels, cleverly exploit the crumbled broadsheets to mop the cinder residue from their ovens while many butcher and florist shops competently wrap up their commodities with pieces of used newspaper.
In conclusion, I contend that it is groundless to stop printed media for it will, more often than not, cause hardship to a great deal of citizens who are prone to be deprived from either their permanent interest or their beloved occupation once newspaper is perished.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1256, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun butcher seems to be countable; consider using: 'many butchers'.
Suggestion: many butchers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2622.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48535564854 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06656598882 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 176.041082164 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621338912134 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2929026555 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.875 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114909053494 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376104607375 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235823684891 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070583693282 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207677613067 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 174.0 78.4519038076 222% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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