Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born.
What might be the reason for this?
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Most people are afraid of living far from their family. They feel safer and more comfortable when living in a place where they were born. However, this brings man some drawbacks. I will mention its pros and cons in this essay.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that people would get love and concern from their parents and relatives while living close to their relatives. This makes them feel beloved. Otherwise, they will have time to take care of their relatives. it is easy for people to get help from relatives living around. Additionally, moving to new place takes them much time to be familiar with new life or to find stable jobs .To start a new job is really hard for the elderly.
On the other hand, people, living far away from their hometown, have some benefits. They will have more chances to get jobs they are interested and well- paid/ get higher salary. Also, with living independently, man will have new invironment to experience and learn many things new which make them grow up and have enough strength to overcome any troubles that might arise.
In conclusion, living or apart from place where people were born has advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, with living apart from family, people will get tense of independence and opportunity to get well- paid job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75111111111 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39610383336 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9211779347 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3571428571 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307617481107 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119160673414 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779730658521 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206077843483 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740850849878 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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