Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world, because of the fast growth of the population, it also causes a number of problems with traditions and culture. Therefore, the government has to create some solution to solve this issue; specifically, the huge fund should be used for supporting art and culture.
On the one hand, a number of citizens want to protect traditional customs, which is true. First and foremost, culture is one of the ways to attract tourist's attention to earn money from this activity so that the more visitors come, the more funding the government has to pay for repair and storing those historical architecture. Besides, art and culture play a vital role in the traditions and beauty of each country which have been passed down for generations. It is therefore not only an opportunity to strengthen a sense of family and community, but also an opportunity for a youngster to broaden their horizons in this way.
On the other hand, although it benefits in certain aspects, it can cause many problems for society. In addition, there are many government officials who take advantage of the situation in order to make money. However, this situation is considered to be in control. Moreover, instead of establishing a fund to preserve cultural diversity, the government can appeal to local citizens to support and utilize this fund for other work. The number of visitors, for instance, has a marked impact on the deterioration of transportation infrastructure and environmental problems, which should be resolved to preserve cultural diversity.
To sum up, not only the government but also the local citizens have a sense of responsibility for supporting art and culture. In addition, I believe that activities will provide a wealth of excellent traditions for the next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15517241379 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04746634594 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537931034483 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1394849452 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29995328853 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101170421012 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812374344652 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180661096829 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414149912666 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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