Some people tend to copy each other when it comes to fashion, clothing and other consumer goods.
As the trends rises its craze, many people are chasing the best and even come to the point of imitating just to put themselves of what is in. In my perspective, I totally disagree with this spoof idea providing some reasons with relevant evidences.
In this contemporary age, we witness how fashion, goods and services upsurge due to the modernization. one thing that is visibly updating almost every month is the vast world of fashion in which it portrays different styles of dressing, various kinds of clothing and never getting outdated. Therefore, the citizens are absolutely craving for what is trending in the society. For instance, every summer it is announced by some fashion experts that the new style of attire has some specific things that basically new to the eyes of the netizens like wearing a too revealing bikini to showcase the modern way of dressing in the hot summer season. Despite the fact that these fashion may cause an arm and a leg, still people chase and buy in order to fill in the satisfaction of being in on what is new.
On the same way, we never get outsmart when it comes to some imported goods from other countries. For example, Iphone company upgrades and updates every year and people are naturally hungry for the new innovation because they think it is part of living in this 21st century. Moreover, it denotes the idea that every person loves to copy one another just to show off that they are also capable to buy that specific trend even if it gives them a chip on their shoulder.
To sum up, I believe that copying to one another does not bring harm as long as it can supply a pleasurable feelings to the people with no discrimination to one another.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...vices upsurge due to the modernization. one thing that is visibly updating almost e...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...and people are naturally hungry for the new innovation because they think it is part of living...
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Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'feeling'?
Suggestion: feeling
... as long as it can supply a pleasurable feelings to the people with no discrimination to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63787375415 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50179569289 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9410027685 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.909090909 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208013108064 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690939540804 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673233591498 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104094868929 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405783951988 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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