Some people think thay the tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and other consumer goods.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that a popular trend in one place, especially in fashion world and household products, tend to be imitated somewhere else. It is true that this tendency is quite prevalent throughout humans’ history, although there have always been individual attempts to be a trend setter.
It is apparent that the world-changing advances in technologies, such as intelligent artificial, are driven by creativity. And to achieve such scientific breakthroughs, it is impossible to be solely dependent on the replication of previous successful methods or models as this approach will unlikely lead humans to effectively solve unforeseeable problems or satisfy our ever-evolving needs. To illustrate, innovative improvements in car batteries have addressed environmentally-conscious buyers’ demand for a green means of transportation that can significantly alleviate climate change. However, it is of note that such innovations account for a minor percentage of our total’s production economy.
Nevertheless, the majority is more inclined to copy others’ successes whether they are a fashion choice or an appliance model as this is the safest option. This strategy has proven to be of great utility throughout human evolution in which only by applying tested survival methods, was a person able to increase his survival chances. This habit has become ingrained in our brains so whenever one is about to start a business, that person will likely study other successful business models so as to ensure the newly-found business can have a better chance of surviving in a competitive market. This business approach is evident in fashion industry where, for example, a sought-after fashion style will be inevitably imitated because this is the most viable option for most businesses.
In conclusion, although innovative ideas help our world move forwards, it is copying strategies allowing most of us, especially small-sized companies, to function normally in today’s economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dual attempts to be a trend setter. It is apparent that the world-changing adv...
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Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... study other successful business models so as to ensure the newly-found business can hav...
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Line 5, column 594, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e of surviving in a competitive market. This business approach is evident in fashion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62333333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37798592195 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3609021784 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.363636364 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118627177186 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044832288199 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378005564242 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070529392632 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049853678243 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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