The tendency for human being to copy one into another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer goods. Do you Agree or disagree?
Copying someone cloths and items which is owned by them is evident nowadays. I firmly agree with this statement and this essay will elaborate more.
To start with, social medias are major factor making lots of people try to copy someone’s social status either their fashions or consumer goods. By this, it means that more and more people get influenced for buying expensive items since most of celebrities do some advertise. It means that people especially young adults tend to mimic celebrities fashions inasmuch as they think that if the celebrities can buy some costly items, it will be possible for them too. Furthermore, there are many items which can show your social status such as jewelry so that individuals are eager to wear something similar in order to enhance their social status. Moreover, People always are keen on fashion trend even that cloths and items have been used by many individuals. For example, Gucci, Van shoe, and Converse are well-known items, so some people want to buy it in order to follow the trend.
Admittedly, it can be said that not all people try copy each other since they are focus on other thing, and they think that every individual owns their uniqueness. Secondly, some people barely follow the trend since they think is unimportant. Nevertheless, I believe that majority of people nowadays prefer to mimic one into another since they want to show their social status by owning costly items and wearing branded cloths.
In conclusion, it seems to me that copying one into another by having same items or cloths is visible today. This ranging from trying to copy celebrities to enhancing social their status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the celebrities') or simply say ''most celebrities''.
Suggestion: most of the celebrities; most celebrities
...uenced for buying expensive items since most of celebrities do some advertise. It means that people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95323741007 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4092906497 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6521236948 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164668957466 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642089185817 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047826326797 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11096297176 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308025517872 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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