the table show the information about change in the mode of traveled in england in 1985 and 2000.smarise the information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible,
The table below provides data about shifts in the way of transportation in England in 1985 and 2000.The average distance in miles traveled per person per year by different mode of transport. The distance covered by cars as transport was largest in fifteen years after 1985.In 2000 least used mode was bicycle but fifteen year ago was taxi.
Firstly, private way of travelling like Cars covered 3199 miles per person per year in 1985 while increased 4806 in 2000.While using bicycle decreased from 51 to 41 per person per year.The walking decrease in very small number from 255 miles per person per year to 237 by fifteen years.
Secondly, local bus which contribute highest in public transportation system 429 per person per year which decrease 274 in 2000. However,long distance bus, train and taxi service flourished in 2000 to 124, 366 and 42 from 54, 289 and 13 in 1985.The other ways of transportation was also increased from 450 to 585 per person per year in 2000.
As an overall trends, to traveled average distance in miles per person per years increased 4740 to 6475 in fifteen years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 24.0651302605 0% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83510638298 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55754836595 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537234042553 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4381309662 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.5 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896863333693 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633196935369 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516743159722 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655156284554 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482414025851 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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