Some people think that administration should spend money in cultural event and historical site. However, other claim that government should invest on some other important things discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is well said that money is not god but not less than God and development of a nation depends upon the proper investment of a budget a number of masses assert that administration should spend money in art and cultural event and historical site. By contrast, rest of individual opine that government should spend money in various sector in order to boost up the progress of country this essay account for the both prospect with my on perception.
10 points to share up former view. For most common organising a cultural activity by making investment can help to soldify cultural heritage and historical background . To demonstrate, at present ,people are forgetting the value of their cultural heritage and historical aspects under the influence of affluent culture which have adverse effect on their ritual and customs. Therefore it is crucial to arrange cultural event by government in order to keep cultural value live . Apart from it administration should arrange art exhibition and cultural events so that people who are talented with singing and dancing can exhibit cultural performance the artist such as painter and drawing master make picture of historical building and freedom fighters religious gods and prominent leader. Needless to say financial investment on cultural events and historical aspects could be lucrative in order to preserve the cultural heritage.
To recapitulate, making investment on cultural and historical events invite some benefits . However we cannot neglect the urgent need of any nation in my preception government should invest major proportion of budget to complete the pressing needs and cultural activities should only be held in the presence of surplus fund.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33595800525 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74975214911 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514435695538 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.073642988 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.416666667 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329961936604 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128857411149 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504668052089 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212367296409 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222583715087 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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