Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects than will be useful in the future, such as those relating to the science and technology.
Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.
Many individuals believe that learners should enroll to their favorite majors in the university. However, the remains considered that students must admit to the subject that advantageous in the future. I assume that better to be accepted in the beneficial future career major compared to enter the subject that students delight in.
The journey of existence has been created to encourage every movement of individuals. In 2050, experts forecast that every element of life need modern technology products and unique scientist to composed new invention. Consequently, the degree achievers career paths are secured for the next plenty of years. Even, it is hard for few people to overcome every problem when they in university, but by eager to learn and research new elements learners should be easy to complete their degree.
Moreover, it should be fine if students want to be admitted to the delightful programs in the university. Unlikely, it will not guarantee to become wealthy in the future. Learners who passioned in the subject able to manage and tackle tough circumstances. Although, if the existence of the era dissolved, the urgency to recover and create new movement should be prioritized.
To conclude, the choices to enrolling in the Universities are depending on the entity. Nevertheless, I believed that the prospect for a human being will be reliable than a satisfying subject.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...oducts and unique scientist to composed new invention. Consequently, the degree achievers car...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hoices to enrolling in the Universities are depending on the entity. Nevertheless, I believed...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28251121076 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90764904562 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1639326194 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6153846154 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241840645404 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758881029412 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648798562106 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148957613903 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402419148492 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...oducts and unique scientist to composed new invention. Consequently, the degree achievers car...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hoices to enrolling in the Universities are depending on the entity. Nevertheless, I believed...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28251121076 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90764904562 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1639326194 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6153846154 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241840645404 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758881029412 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648798562106 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148957613903 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402419148492 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.