Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The training circumstance for adolescents is always a huge challenge for education system. I particular, there are some people think that university students ought to learn whatever they want, however, the opponents assume that just need study subjects related to science and technology which will be useful in the future. Thus, the essay below will analyze virtually these opinions.
To begin with, university students should study extra class beside the main circumstance of their major. For instance, it is extremely helpful if a pharmacy students opt to more credit for economic class, because pharmacists will not only concentrate into labor work but also they need run a various commercial program to sell commodities. Furthermore, the employees have experiment with a lot of major outside their domination’s will be fascinated by the employers. Theoretically, students need focus onto training to become a best version of themselves by developing dominates major and adding different necessary skills which are useful after.
On the other hand, those disciplines which will be efficient does not include just technology and science. Due to the world did not develop from the ancient with just these majors, it also need other spectacular faces to contribute the global today. No one can explicitly reject the role of music, art, language and a plenty of majors such as not imperative things. Generally, revolution is the collection of the cooperation of various areas together.
In conclusion, university student can challenge themselves with plenty of subjects and learn what appropriate extra credits helpful for their major.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: Did you mean 'needs'?
Suggestion: needs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93682051713 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8653294282 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26837668264 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856036015296 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101903104288 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152186286272 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938437509961 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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