As modern society has evolved unstoppably since the beginning, many subjects nowadays are eliminated on account of the help of robots and computers. Therefore, there are two divisions for that fact: one is that the young from universities keep on studying whatever they like and one is that they ought to discover new aspects which are related to the latest trend.
First of all, regarding the freedom of choice where students in colleges can make their own ways for their favorites despite the development of new inventions and innovations through their dedication and love. Everyone has their own dreams about the occupation they want when they were children. It is what the long for a long period, that leads to their dedication and hard work, where the best efforts and outcomes are made. As an illustration, almost all the top billionaires on the world have raised their achievements such as KFC, the man made his own label through what he loves. In short, everything, where passion is put into, will turn out to be a success.
However, to be practical and realistic, it is hard to commit the idea upon in our recent community as the repetitive careers are gradually disappearing. Because of the breakthrough evolution of 4.0 technology, the number of postgraduated students who are unemployed has increased for a few latest years. The machine will replace humans from many subjects which leads to numerous subjects become useless. For example, in the sewing field, many factories, cooperations, and companies cut down on employees since they don't have to pay extensions like working condition insurance and the amount of working time is another reason.
In my opinion, every student is able to do well in all subjects provided that they are flexible and hard-working. Any subjects can adapt through the developing science and technology so that it is worthless to give up on what they are pursuing. For example, in the sewing article, the students who will to learn about that aspect will alter the way of work in the past by giving fascinating ideas about the module of their products.
In conclusion, although machines are extremely helpful, humans create them so that keep on your intention without worry
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have on our life.Which do you consider to be the major influence? 61
- The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London. 78
- Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...panies cut down on employees since they dont have to pay extensions like working con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0325203252 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75068685168 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571815718157 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9570497443 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177458390604 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545549950081 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038319682864 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868385917425 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489951187036 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.