Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
People's opinions differ whether as to
arts is crucial Subject for children or not. In my opinion, I consider art as an important subject as it helps Children to become more creative and hone their natural talent.
On the one hand, certain people have a perception that art is not practical and it is irrelevant to their lives. In other words, nowadays most of the multinational Companies are looking for employees who have unique skill sets in science, math, technology and business ,and thus, leading people to believe that arts is not a viable option for children to learn. For instance out of most of the artists, only a handful are able to earn name and fame while others struggle to earn their livelihood by selling their art.
On the other hand, certain reasons can be held liable why i and others consider that arts is an Important subject to learn. Firstly, learning arts helps children , especially young ones ,to improve their creativity and imagination. without improving their creative skills and imagination power , they could not be able to become a dynamic thinker in the future. Secondly, arts offers a medium to children to Express their thoughts and convey complex ideas , as Children do not have required linguistic Capabilities to communicate directly. Finally, Some children have god gifted talent, learning arts ensure that they hone their skills to the fullist.
In conclusion, while, nowadays job-oriented subjects are Considered more important to
Have a secure career, I reiterate that arts should be taught alongside other subject
and should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15769230769 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68346798904 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.039508725 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.909090909 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230877645623 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104732986208 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606611906305 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114928582152 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627182441824 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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