Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet, to communicate.
What are the advantages of international communication online? Are there nay disadvantages to this?
It is undeniable that breakthroughs in science, especially in the domain of information technology, have numerous negative effects on the way people communicate to each other. Amongst of them, the most significant leap should be mentioned is that the ability to contact on the worldwide scale. However, it has some certain demerits that are going to be examined in this essay.
Thanks to the advance of technological system and internet connection, residences who are accommodating in different parts of the globe can engage in verbal communication. This has a considerable positive values for the community of language learners who have been relentlessly looking for opportunities to practice languages with native speakers. To clarify this point, a typical example is that a student in Vietnam can enroll in a course hosted by an American teacher who is locating half way around the world. Moreover, making friends on social network platforms has been proved to be an efficacious way to expand an individual's social circle, which may offer more choices in the process of searching for a partner.
Albeit all advantages mentioned above, there have been some cases proving otherwise. Abundance of cyber crimes have been reported recently, in which scam is considered as the most common. It is a challenging task to verify an identity of a person on a social website, taking advantage of which, criminals cover themselves with counterfeit identity to carry on scams. Furthermore, it is obvious that more and more users with false names are leaving vulgar comments on video clips or photographs without any fear of responsibility.
Taking all merits and demerits into account, it is translucent that international communication online bring our generation immeasurable benefits that the predecessor ones could not imagine. Otherwise, users should raise vigilance to ensure the personal security.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'value'?
Suggestion: value
...ation. This has a considerable positive values for the community of language learners ...
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Line 2, column 618, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...oved to be an efficacious way to expand an individuals social circle, which may offer more cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38720538721 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08738970577 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3129003349 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164482450552 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495831799891 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473850161397 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952813799388 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404754380466 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.