Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative way of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Crime has been an agonizing problem in our society through out history, as a result, many solutions have been proposed to mitigate this issues. For instance, increasing the amount of time spent in prison of criminals is believed by some to be the optimal solutions. Others, however, are of the opinion that there are superior alternatives. Personally, I am of the belief that the first method is incredibly effective and it can be enhanced by combing with education.
Increasing the sentences to reduce crime rate is a valid solution. This mean the law enforcement will give out stricter punishments for criminals. This increase can deter individuals who have malicous intent and hopefully prevent them form commiting crimes. In Vietnam, for example, many minorities turn to poaching wild animals or smuggling drugs for a living because the time in confinement is meager compare to the lucrative income. If the authority enforce longer sentences, it should curb this issues.
Bettering the education system can also help in alleviating crimes. Most crimes can be attributed to the lack of money, which leads to reckless behavior. Helping people to have better jobs via sharing skills and knowledge can significantly improve poverty, and therefore, crime rate. Affluent neigborhoods perfectly exemplify this theory, the residents here have higher income, as a result, the number of criminals here is almost negligible. In contrast, this number is substancially higher in places with lower income. This instance shows that increasing financial competence of the overall populations via education can be the key to reducing crimes to a unnoticeable figures.
In conclusions, although confining inmates for a longer period of time is not the most effective all-around solution, the preventative efficacy of it is high. If this is executed in combinations with helping people to have better professional skills, it can lead to an incredibly competent solution for curbing crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41290322581 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96840104883 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9922592735 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7058823529 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134496413161 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468150862263 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497087744932 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784858726723 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203864749848 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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