Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Many people hold different views about how to decline the crime rate. Although it can be argued that the best policy to prevent the misdeed from occurring is to execute the longer prison sentences. I believe that there are better alternative methods of restricting offense.
In this day and age, several countries have a tendency to accept that criminals are unavoidable. To illustrate, Italy is one of the countries that has the highest rate of offense. In 2015, the crisis migration resulted in an expanded range of terrorism, even the prisons were full of recaptured criminals. In other words, despite applying longer prison sentences, the crime rate is not reduced at all.
In contrast, in countries like Iceland or Denmark, the felon rate is just between 0,3 to 0,5 per a thousand dwellers. However, they do not use longer prison sentences, they decide to promote their justice system with the impartial of building a greater society. The government will enforce a decree that all families in their country have to educate their children about the behave, qualifications, and the right and wrong things. The reason is that people believe that early education has a huge impact on the growth of juveniles. Furthermore, according to a survey, the given decree was enormously effective, the crime rate experienced a significant decline after the policy was promulgated.
In conclusion, in spite of the longer prison sentences can be workable for several cases. I completely support those who suppose people should give other long-term policies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ws about how to decline the crime rate. Although it can be argued that the best policy t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the crime rate is not reduced at all. In contrast, in countries like Iceland or ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ry have to educate their children about the behave, qualifications, and the right and wron...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17529880478 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78029994366 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4617525324 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230417611399 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712291228085 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694757232606 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138178925568 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467544754878 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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