Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the
family.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family run business?
Now a day most of the businessmen all over the world continue their business with their family members. some people continue their family business next to their parents. most of the people think that the particular business is the pride of their family. they also think that it is the identity of their family. but I have a different opinion on this topic.
every person has their own talent and own ideas to do in their life. since some people wish to continue their pride works over the generations, they insist their family members take over the business. even though they have different ideas to do in their life, they are not allowed to shine in their wished career path. due to their emotional sentiments, those people are dropping their wishes and goal and take over the business. even they don't have much skill in that business, they make them take over their business. they think that their business should be filled with their family members only. they are forcing their family members to involve in the business.
since many capitalists have their own family members in their business, The skilled people from other families are not allowed to participate in their business. every person has their own dream and goal. With that goal, they are working hard to go forward to achieve that. due to this kind of businessman, Their dreams are vanishing. even their family members are not skilled in that work, they won't allow other people to work on it. this may lead their business to loss. but they won't care about such stuff. they always want their business to be run by one of our family members. Because of this, Sometime there won't be the right person in the right position. In spite of these practices, some talented person has broken these barriers and became an entrepreneur.
To conclude this, the right talent to be in the right place. every person has their own talent. we should force our family members to stick with our own family business. we should let them shine in their own fields. A business is not only for the family member, we can own the business, but we should not have that business only for a single-family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, kind of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 24.0651302605 283% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73404255319 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22711057268 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404255319149 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8919644063 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9259259259 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9259259259 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142567062768 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569334475866 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686786546341 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116555559729 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047316426609 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 8.58950901804 72% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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