Some people think that a car is a best way to travel in cities. While other believe that bicycle is a better way. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few people considered that car is the better way to travel one place to another place. Whereas, other think that bicycle is the good source of traveling. Before forming any firm opinion both sides will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in this modern era, cars become part and parcel of humans life. For example, car are very lucrative and luxurious as compared to bicycle also it saves people precious time during traveling. As a result, people give more preference to car instead of bicycle. Moreover, car is the good source of amusement as well as comfortable while traveling. For example, individuals can listen songs, watch videos for entertainment their self. In result, it is worthwhile for them to leave no stone unturned to do recreational activities.
On the other hand, bicycle acts as a stepping stone in every human being life. For example, people can stay fit as fiddle by riding bicycle in their daily routine life. As a result, bicycle play an vital role to uplift the standard of health. Adding to it, in this era of technology bicycle help the environment to reduce pollution instead of car. To exemplify, it helps to save the environment and people can stay away from diseases by riding bicycle. In result, bicycle play an magnificent role for every people to live long.
In my opinion, it is vividly said that every coin has two espects. But according to me, people have to give preference to bicycle as compared to car because it wipe away whole the disease and make body bones strong.
To conclude, people use car to uplift the standard of their living. But people have to use car to some extent or some other emergencies in the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y to travel one place to another place. Whereas, other think that bicycle is the good s...
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Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...icycle is the good source of traveling. Before forming any firm opinion both sides wil...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...routine life. As a result, bicycle play an vital role to uplift the standard of he...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...riding bicycle. In result, bicycle play an magnificent role for every people to li...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wipes'?
Suggestion: wipes
...o bicycle as compared to car because it wipe away whole the disease and make body bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80068728522 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54254663754 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6116982625 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5263157895 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274811836394 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808548027025 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556804238272 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160502763041 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710717438886 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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