Some people believe that children should not given homework everyday, while others believe that homework play an important role in education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few perportion of masses considered that teachers should not be given additional work to juveniles everyday, whereas, other assert that home work play an magnificent role in students life. Before farming any firm opinion both sides will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, giving homework to students is a better way to uplift the standard of their knowledge. For example, I studied in guru Nanak academy and my teacher always give me additional work to do by which I always toil hard to do that homework. As a result, I was get highest grades in my final exams and it was only because of homework. Moreover, by getting homework children can get good grades in their exams. So that, they can apply for a well paid job to fulfill their desires and live aristocratic lifestyle in the society which is beyond comparison to find out supreme outcomes.
On the other hand, if they get lots of homework in their daily routine life by which they can suffer from depression due to additional work because they donot get time to do other things. Which should be detrimental for them as well as their parents too. Last but the not the least, they also distract from their cultural games and their own culture should be on the back seat and suffer from different type of diseases because children give more preference to additional work instead of games and it should be a biggest menance which ruin their life properly.
To sum up, it is vividly said that every coin has two sides. But in my point of view, teacher have to give homework to some extent and children have to give more preference to outdoor activities to stay fit as fiddle and show their hidden talent by playing such games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t be given additional work to juveniles everyday, whereas, other assert that home work p...
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
...ereas, other assert that home work play an magnificent role in students life. Befo...
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y an magnificent role in students life. Before farming any firm opinion both sides wil...
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the highest'.
Suggestion: get the highest
...to do that homework. As a result, I was get highest grades in my final exams and it was onl...
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the not the'. Did you mean 'not the'?
Suggestion: not the
... as well as their parents too. Last but the not the least, they also distract from their cu...
Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
... work instead of games and it should be a biggest menance which ruin their life p...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68333333333 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4268200501 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9864521503 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202620290437 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073672013564 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505530635226 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130242222198 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395118666267 0.056905535591 69% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.