Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way
These days many of the society believed that a car js the best way to travel in cities while others think riding bicycle is a better way. There are both advantages and disadvantages for people who chose driving a car to travel around the cities currently. In this essay, I completely agree that using car as transportation in the cities is more effective whose gives more benefits rather than the drawbacks for several cases.
In the one hand, travelling around cities is more effective and easier if we use a car as the transport rather than riding a bike. Firstly, cars capacity is absolutely bigger than bicycles which can load 4-8 passengers and many stuffs at once whilst if we choose bicycles whose certainly limited. It is alike with a moment when we are planning to hang out or shopping with family in the city, if we decide to have a drive with car, we can go together and arrive at the same time. Obviously, we don’t have to think about stuffs we bought such as how to bring it to our home. As the result, driving car for having stroll in the city is better than riding bicycle due to effectiveness and simplicity. So it is important to reconsider that driving car us the best way to travel instead of riding a bike.
Differs with the benefit above, there are some demerits in using car as our transport such as we will easily trapped in a bottleneck due to overcrowding. Because of that, in the several times it js better to ride a bicycle for strolling around the city. For instance, in the office hours, most of the workers move to their office at the same time which undoubtedly the traffic must be worse than in other hours. Therefore, looking at the situation we can obtain a merit of utilizing bicycles as our transport in the cities even though only in the certain times. So there is no doubt that using car in the cities gives more good sides while bicycle is lesser.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that believe using a car is the best decision for travelling in the cities due to its effectiveness after compared with the bicycle. In my opinion, it gives more advantages rather than the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
... and disadvantages for people who chose driving a car to travel around the cities curre...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'trap'
Suggestion: trap
...as our transport such as we will easily trapped in a bottleneck due to overcrowding. Be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56103896104 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54308662722 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483116883117 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.621826953 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353335173706 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128232883165 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148375484576 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238178485882 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134680142686 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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