Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this ers, spending money is major factor of any countries ,they need pay out those things which are helpful for the Nations as well as people. Some human beings ponder that, related to arts :painting; dancing and music misuse of money and the government ought to expand this case upon extra Public Service. I partially agree with the given statement.
On one hand ,youngsters are forgetting those arts skilss which can keep their mind calm and stress less like painting ,dancing and music. Some mankind's reckon that, spend money on arts are waste of money . But mejority of people are used to with arts like painting and music to leave stressless life. Government should spend money on arts because all student can not able to learn subject related to science, maths and English, if government pay out money on art so those who are not educated the can learn these are art skills and become a Pandit in music and dancing. Also, through music and painting people can make their classes and find the way to earn money ,because of that , which can mitigate unemployment problems. For an example, in India not only government payout mone upon arts but also business tycoon - like organiser TV show related to music dancing and arts due to that, people can show their talents on these are TV shows and change their life . Additionaly, chance to win money as well as make name and fame.
On the other hand, many people recommended that, government ought to spend on public service like hospitals farming transportation roads and related to covid-19 time, because these are service our daily uses and need for living a life. Thee epitome of this, in hazardous days, everyone is suffering from Corona pandemic. Indian government has taken crystal decision launch one app for solve covid-19 problems also rich people can give some money to solve this problem on this app. Moreover, government spent large amount of money on mitigate covid-19 pandemic because of that, proportion of Corona people low vis -a`- vis other Nations.
In conclusion, government ought to spend money on arts because it is part of human life and source of earning money. However, also they should spend money upon daily uses Public Service such as transport, education and Hospitality
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93717277487 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35604919542 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523560209424 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2279791212 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411106176157 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146770966067 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647717095097 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263065659038 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230897605094 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.