Some people think that childern should start primary school later in life, others thinks that they should start it before 7. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that people should wait until their children grow older to start primary school, others, however, believe that it is better to have children attend school at an early age. From my perspective, I completely agree with the second opinion.
On the one hand, they will have more time to prepare themselves if they go to elementary school later in life. In particular, during the time children stay at home, they can receive home-education and get more confidence to face with any challenge in life. An example of this is a programme that I watched talking about a man who did not start schooling until 7 got two PhDs in maths and physics. Moreover, delaying the time to go to school means children have more time beside their families. In other words, families' bonds can be strengthened. As a consequence, children's world of soul will be nourishes plausibly.
On the other hand, children receiving school education earlier will get them involved in more practical situations. At school, apart from studying theoretical knowledge in classrooms, they may also get into troublesome cases, through which they learn how to react and behave wisely and correctly. In this way, they will acquire necessary skills and useful knowledge more effectively. Another reason for this is that not all households have the capability and time to support their children's education at home. My neighbor's family is an instance, her parents' work schedule is very heavy, and they also have to deal with the houseworks, so they have to send their daughter to a boarding school.
In conclusion, it is best that people allow children to begin their schooling early in life, rather than take them to school at a later stage, because it brings about many benefits, like reducing the weight on parents and increasing their ability to cope in real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, in particular, talking about, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9644012945 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66523667946 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9506141229 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172281312028 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589442358394 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472414779979 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117274098069 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343726208261 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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