Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, when technology has become less expensive and its accessibility is more available, people have been enabled to work and study online at home. From my perspective, this development has both upsides and downsides.
On the one side, no longer having to travel away from home assists people to live more economically. This is because commuting to work or school is unnecessary for them. For example, after the Ukraine-Russia war, the gasoline price has risen dramatically. Therefore, this will reduce the money spent on travelling, as well as the weight on their budgets. Moreover, it increases the level of security in life. An instance of this is the Covid-19 pandemic, by staying at home and still capable of working, a plethora of people had successfully avoided contracting the disease, for they have limited contact with one another. As a result, the fatality rate was made as low as possible.
On the flip side, people can have difficulty in socialising with the others. Particularly, technology has made it so convenient that almost anything can be done at home, leading to less need to go outside home. This means they have less time for conversation with others, creating anti-social behaviours. Another bad point of this is that the quality of work can be unqualified. Although people find it flexible for them to work or study from home, unwanted disturbances can always occur. Possible interruptions like noises from neighbours can distract employees, while at the workplace, they will work in an environment that boosts concentration.
In conclusion, technology advancement undeniably brings many benefits to humanity; however, it also causes a number of negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22909090909 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02447099397 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8193425189 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267646544613 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797355686125 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650457973862 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162358085135 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696932679535 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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