Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people discuss that children should get a formal education when they turn 7 years old. I totally approve of this idea and this essay shall describe my opinion about letting children go to school as soon as possible.
There are several reasons why children at the age of 6 should get study. First of all, children attend to school early can generate many positive outcomes. It is easier to gain knowledge and experience when you are young because your brain at these ages still develops, thus the younger can learn very quickly. For example, In VietNam all households must let their kids go to primary school when they get to 6, this decline the illiteracy which causes a major threat to society. Moreover, teachers can help children see their potential skills and develop these skills for them by teaching them. As a result, these children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years. For instance, Primary schools will provide high-quality education equipment so teachers can learn some basic skills which equip them with vital soft skills including teamwork and communication skills. On the other hand, several parents let their kids play with high-technologies too much which can lead them to have an unhealthy lifestyle. Gradually, this will make them feel isolate or even have autism.
In conclusion, although, protecting children in their homes is good but this declines the opportunities that they can explore and experience outside the house. Therefore, I believe that parents send their children to school when they start the first talk as soon as possible is the right decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09191176471 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58913075669 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6201345531 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194879766584 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759946372291 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795452724085 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136049845978 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434616302713 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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