Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People are divided on whether formal education for preadolescents should begin at a younger stage of life, or should it be when they are at least 7 of age. The rationale behind such early-stage formal education stemmed from the fact that young children’s capabilities are immersing while others would argue that their neurological development only begins at a later stage. Personally, I am skewed toward the latter perspective.
Contently, those supported this notion were greatly influenced by how rare research pointed out that children have significant potential to learn at a very young age, some even excels their peers in terms of language skills. For instance, some rare prodigy possesses extraordinary language skills at the age of 3 and masters several different languages later in life when they were exposed to early formal educations. As such, introducing formal education in these extents sounds promising as it can vastly enhance the child’s capabilities to perform and accomplish astonishing achievements latter on in life.
Notwithstanding all of that, others would argue that, scientifically, majority of children’s neurological development only begin when reaching the age of 7. Consequently, such early exposure to formal education can be overwhelming for the child’s physique and mentality; thus, neglecting other’s important aspects as exposure to formal education at an early stage in life can result in a sacrifice of personal’s aspects including bonding time with their caregivers and family. I firmly believe with this perspective as a holistic approach for a child’s development must encompass not only formal educations, but also a nurturing for a child’s emotion, mentality, and social manner and etiquette which can only be learnt from their direct caregivers at an early age. Specifically, by spending time with their loved ones at a younger age a child can learn how to regulate their emotions and enhance their social skills which is of great importance for a comprehensive development.
In conclusion, the argument supporting early-stage education sounds promising as this helps to expand a child’s capabilities to a greater extent. Nevertheless, a holistic and more well-rounded approach that caters to their emotional, mental, and social needs are more realistic and plausible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...uage skills at the age of 3 and masters several different languages later in life when they were ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtance for a comprehensive development. In conclusion, the argument supporting e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58426966292 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19693033869 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542134831461 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298171367419 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113934424712 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996228035595 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185350963058 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105335628267 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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