There is conundrum among people about of whether children s shall begin their school life soon or in the age of seven. I will shed light on both opinions of the aforementioned statement and will further delineate it with plausible reasons followed by reasonable opinion.
Commencing with those who claim 3 years age is best for schooling . A predominant reason is that in this age children has fresh mind and they learn easily.To explicate it, it is their beginning age where teachers can mold them according their way in which children have interest.They can do everything easily as they do all the things with full concentration.To epitome, a survey was conducted by education department in Mumbai in 2016 has revealed that 70% of children start their school education at the age of three.As a result, children should know several things like moral values , sharing and how to behave with their friends.
As far as I am concerned with I advocate in the favor of latter statement.The reason behind this is the minority of individuals think that children should not handle the situation wisely prior to the age of seven. In other words, they only focus on playing and also parents worried about how their adolescents behave with their peers. To exemplify, in metropolitan cities 60% of parents send their children to school after the age of seven. Therefore, parents opine that they should prepare their children at home by giving social and moral values.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that children should go to school in early age because children receive numerous benefits and after the age of seven is too late to start school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9667896679 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71711429388 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.748791193 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.555555556 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310839933212 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135846611442 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728757012605 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207385542412 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605036576986 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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