Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe that they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern era, life without education is considered useless. Some think that juveniles should start their schooling early while others believe it should take place after the age of seven. Before jumping to any conclusion, let's discuss the both aspects.
No doubt, if the schooling starts in the early age, toddlers have more chances to learn and gain knowledge. It would sharpen their minds. By going to educational institutions they would be able to perform different activities and to grab new skills. It also have a great impact on their behaviour and ethical views. It is also said that the first five years of the child's life is the crucial one because what the learn in this stage will assist them in buliding their future.
On the other hand, some opine that schooling should not be before the age of seven. When the child start it's schooling they are provided with homework and many more which is considered as a burden. They get stressed which affect them physically and mentally. They are not able to grow and perform such things which children of their age do so.
To conclude, having discussed the topic at length, as per my perspective, parents ought to make their toddlers to join the school at early age to enhance knowledgeable skills but with less workload .
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...wledgeable skills but with less workload .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80542986425 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40388655357 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9709425301 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6923076923 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31553350236 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105104405637 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13460387187 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195701771076 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142034368265 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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