In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
Undoubtedly, unemployment is considered as the burning problem from last few decades. The proportion of qualified students is more than jobs. There are abundant of reasons for this suitation. Let's shed the light on it's causes in the upcoming paragraphs.
Education is the best weapon to change the world but after achieving good scores in academic still many are jobless. The primary concern for this is overpopulation. In many parts of the world, many people are uneducated due to which they do not know about the family planning. Rate of infanty is increasing with great pace. Furthermore, age groups also matter's alot in this problem. Students are getting higher degrees to get recruit in reputated companies because of which they grow elder and miss the chances of jobs. Companies think that by employing younger employees more people get attract towards different schemes and products.
In this competitive era, every one is more indulged only courses like engineering and medical as they are insisted by the parents and near ones. The seats in these streams are limited but the number of job wishers are triple every year according to the survey conducted by India's employees rate.
To cap it all, having discussed the topic at length, as per my perspective, birth rate should be controlled as it is directly proportional to unemployment. Students ought to choice their own subjects or streams which would distrub the job seekers in every field and not get stick to one field. By following these measures the rate of jobless people will decline in the every corner of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...abundant of reasons for this suitation. Lets shed the light on its causes in the upc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65716929617 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1453621135 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1094271843 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032567140818 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351793647406 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556685705221 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330566930912 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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