It is a fact that some ex-prisoners become good residents, and opinions are divided whether such people should speak to youngsters to educate them or not. Although there are several alternative methods, I believe that this idea is more significant.
The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much less effective. One popular option is providing students with information in school through documentaries or books. However, school children may find it boring and theoretical, so they are not really concerned about the danger of crime. Another option is that police officers speak to students about crime. This could be useful in terms of warning young people about the consequences lawbreakers have to face when they are caught, but adolescents are often reluctant to take advice from figures of authority.
There are many reasons why allowing ex-prisoners to speak to children about their experience is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law. One of them is that teenagers are more likely to accept advice from people who talk about their experience. This is because they feel more reality about ex-offenders’ stories and how they became involved in crime, so they are likely to avoid such illegal actions. In addition, hearing what life in prison is really like and the danger of a criminal lifestyle may eliminate an idea that criminals’ lives are appealing, which are described in some movies and novels.
In conclusion, I believe that raising awareness of children about the danger of committing a crime by using reformed offenders to speak about their stories has more impact compared to other methods.
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- Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future Do you think it is a positive or negative development 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21111111111 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76894645522 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7596814685 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232382585375 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816647566911 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513587181383 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135492951923 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207207521741 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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