Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day.
What is your opinion?
It is true that companies have a considerate responsibility for their employees´ health. However, I completely disagree with the idea that they should therefore set up a time for exercise at the workplace.
In my opinion, forcing all the companies to provide exercise time during a day is thoroughly impractical. For certain occupations which especially involve punctuality or avoid distracting elements, stopping the staff to do exercise by some means becomes annoying. For instance, it seems ludicrous for me when doctors have to do stop their work to exercise whereas there is an emergency that requires immediate actions. Besides, even employees could be forced to do exercise, I doubt that people would fully understand the need for that activity. On the contrary, they might feel obligated and thus increase their unwillingness and reluctance toward the companies.
As well as being impractical, I would argue that exercise in the workplace is unnecessary. Personally I believe that companies should instead improve the quality of the meals served to the staff. Seeing that nutrition plays a key role in enhancing health; yet it is much easier to implement with a profound impact. If people can eat healthily and mindfully what they enjoy, it can not only protect them from illnesses like food poisoning, stomachache, but also improve their mood and boost their productivity. In addition, companies can encourage their staff to do physical activities by certain promotions such as buying them memberships of a gym. For example, Baker&McKensy has a healthcare policy to ensure their workers´ well-being. That is signing them up in a health club and allowing them to leave earlier than other law firms do so that they can have more free time for exercise.
In conclusion, while compulsory time to do exercise in the office seems like a good idea, I believe that such a scheme would be unworkable and largely pointless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21153846154 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02935316608 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612179487179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4203255515 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9333333333 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223304846495 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074443973096 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843781173764 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13259646209 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542852539166 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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