The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The line graph illustrates the quantity of questions which the Tourist Information Office collected either face-to-face or by other means of communication namely mails and phone calls in a particular city from January to June in 2011. Overall, the enquiries sent by mails showed a relatively small degree of decline; meanwhile, the number of queries asked directly and by telephone increased dramatically over the course of 6 months.
Starting with approximately 800 enquiries in January, the statistics for mailing method slightly declined in the next month then levelled off before it fell rapidly until May and remained constant at under 400 mails.
However, the number of enquiries sent in person with the lowest starting point, at just over 400 enquiries, tended to soar rapidly and continuously and reached its peak of roughly 1900 enquiries in June. Despite the main tendency to rise, the figure for telephone experienced many fluctuations until it peaked 1600 phone calls at the end of the period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27329192547 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83394579948 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.7360400891 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.8 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217988792932 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969759354791 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503680959169 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125723652338 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742743299497 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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