Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is true that individuals should look after themselves. However, the government is also accountable for the well-being of the population. In my opinion, I believe that the two arguments are both understandable.
On the one hand, people ought to be responsibly concerned about their health. The most important reason is that once they take care of themselves well enough, they have a better chance of preventing serious illnesses. For example, if one is careful about food handling and general hygiene, the risks of skin infections, pneumonia, food poisoning can be decreased. At the same time, as ´´an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure´´, a little precaution before a crisis occurs can help to save more money than fixing it when it has started. Another reason is that doing the right thing for your body pays off for your mind as well. If a person has healthy habits, it is likely that he can feel happier and more relaxed. Moreover, it leads to better mental health to make social connections and avoids mental problems.
On the other hand, the opinion of the governmental responsibility for public health is equally reasonable. Initially, citizens pay taxes which, in turn, should serve the taxpayers. Hence, the government has the duty of providing good healthcare service to their people. Secondly, a country with a healthy population is more beneficial in the long run because that country does not have to combat constant battles with fatal diseases also it does not spend thousands of $$ in health care. In other words, if the state generously funds hospital spending and improves health service as well as hospital facilities, not only can they enhance the well-being of their population, but also the quality of the workforce.
In conclusion, seeing that health is vitally important, I believe that the wellness of a population requires accountability of both governments and citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97938495228 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593650793651 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1259926378 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253506265812 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083530705121 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880541165061 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143206731547 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305476535177 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.