One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that businesses should provide sports facilities for workers. This apprehension seems to be more rational this essay will further elaborate my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are deluges of arguments in favour of sports facilities must be provide by business to their employees. The most preponderant one is that staff have the chance to improve their health. To elaborate it profoundly, with the help of sports staff can strengthen their immune system and cognitive abilities. As a result employees can work more efficiently. It put positive impact on business growth. For example in Microsoft company the inbuilt gym facilities is provided within company, whenever employees feel exhauseded from work they can perform aerobic exercises in that gyms. These kind of facilities help employees to reduces their stress level. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, masses can enhance the quality and productivity of their lives with ease, efficacy and convenience.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help in one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides it can encourage new staff to join the company. This is because new staff easily attracted by the facilities that has provided by businesses. As a result it is very helpful for business to expand and it is also helpful for staff to remain loyal to the company. For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicates that companies must provide sports facilites for employees it is crucial and critical for the development for the business. Hence, it is clear why many people consider it as a positive development.
On the other hand, a section of society contradicts above-mentioned views by providing reliable justifications, they claim that sports facilities are too expensive for small businesses. To make it justifiable there are number of businesses that are not able to provide facilities to their employees. This is because they have to mange their other expenses. If they provide extra facilities to their workers it will create financial burden on them. As a result it increases the chances of business failure. Consequently, it is apparent that many people consider providing sports facilites to workers as a negetive development.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that despite some drawbacks the benefits of providing sports facilities to employees are indeed too great, to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26477541371 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92152291161 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498817966903 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.789124549 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8260869565 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166649297454 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046105081563 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422462905725 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953879640863 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244069424331 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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