Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that education of young ones has been positively impacted by participating in competitive activities, whereas a fair proportion of individuals disagrees with the notion. I am, to some extent, convinced with as competition is a necessity, nowadays, but over competitiveness can create a detrimental impact on a child’s education.
The beneficiary of competitive games has boosted children morale along with competing skills in a positive manner, which ultimately develops their academics. Games are usually organized to teach students to cope up with under pressure situations, and therefore, this approach tends them to fight with exam pressure. For example, during the examination, even scholar students have been observed anxious due to exam’s marks; however, sports player can be always seen as confident and active in an examination hall. Moreover, pupils experience to stand up against either win or lose, when playing adventurous sports, this will boost up their competing skills gradually that will help them in their education level. Consequently, these practices have uplifted a child’s academic records due to confidence and ability to survive in competitiveness atmosphere.
Turning to its negative approach, students who are completely indulging in a competition aura may lose their study skills. To endorse sport as a career prospect, most of the students start neglecting their studies and lose interest in it. Furthermore, pupils who unable to manage sheer pressure get psychological disorder on the mind, thus this disorder can inhibit their learning ability as well as mental growth. For instance, the cutthroat competition to achieve good grades can lead to performing better among others, if they are unable to achieve the desired goal, ultimately, can put them in a strain and may harm their mental activity. Then, sports competition can lead to negative consequences on a child’s mind.
To conclude, I believe that physical competition is vital for the youngster but it should not be over competitiveness, though it must be played with playful manner instead of stiff competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dren morale along with competing skills in a positive manner, which ultimately develops their academ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50609756098 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09005596479 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.9232289447 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.923076923 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115758818299 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477429186266 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370862861837 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693342917357 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359715039687 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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