Many peple conceive that sovereign states should control the quantity of food which they import and chiefly nosh productions in their country. I strongly disagree with this notion. In my essay, I will clarify my opinion.
Fristly, if governments curbed the import nourishment, the financial system in there nations would be impacted. Since, it’s very problematic to export commodities to others countries. This makes economic system decresing. Moreover, it also influences to foreign rapports. Secondly, the foodstuff in these nations aren’t divergent. This is reason why dwellers in there feel bored with local aliment. Gradually, they don’t want to eat them and nosh junkfood more. By doing so, those countries’s inhabitants are deficiency of substance.
Thirdly, it causes them less know about others countries’ culture. They are hard to eat alien victuals sush as sushi, kimchi, etc. Futhermore, when they go abroad to work or study, they can’t adapt with other nations’ culture. Hence, it’s disadvantages for them. Looking close at developed countries, the governments in there always encourage their dwellers to import food from alien nations.
To conclude, I perceive that almost governments shouldn’t delimit import fares.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tem in there nations would be impacted. Since, it’s very problematic to export commod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67021276596 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81894820642 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728723404255 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7776938055 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7058823529 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0588235294 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199340818606 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476537133839 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517353639221 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104541548881 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469756153789 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.42 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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