Some people think that criminal behaviour has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued by some that there are some hereditary reasons behind criminality, while others oppose and claimed that situations make criminals. However, in my opinion, no one is born with a criminal mind, the social and family problems often induce criminal behaviours.
On the one hand, people who support genetic reasons believe that parental involvement during the pregnancy and childbirth years might influence the unborn child to become a criminal in his or her later life. They think many of the criminal's backgrounds are often connected with their ancestors who committed any sort of crime during their lifetime. They explain that even before childbirth, parents or family members discussed more anti-social or unauthenticated things always insist the generations be born with a criminal attitude. For instance, actors children become actors, children of doctors or educated parents be a doctor or educated, the same phenomenon would be in the case of criminals to the core.
On the other hand, social crises or family issues often create more criminals than genetic. Some unfortunate conditions or unreliable impacts might indeed lead people to behave brutally even if they have good character and manners. Similarly, the overinfluence of political and social reasons also lead many people to be violent or to do a crime such as political murders and brutal killings. Such persons may not have a history of crime in their families. Likewise, certain issues of families like finance, ancestral properties, conflicts between members would make some people become arrogant and may do violence. Furthermore, supportive and protective of culprits are the ones who create more and more people to come forward to do crime than the genetic reasons.
To sum up, there is some evidence to support of genetic creatures of criminals, even though, in my perspective, other factors include social, financial, political and family problems are the overwhelming influence on criminal behaviours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, then, while, for instance, sort of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40064102564 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8136991563 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6090756528 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.615384615 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246485359612 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841501784206 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307501210494 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139133793353 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357064657296 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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