Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that new technologies and devices have had revolutionary influences on all aspects of human life, so the use of technology should be inhibited to reduce the complexity of daily life. While it is true that modern technology affects people to some extent, I believe that excluding technology is not a good option.
To begin with, there are several inconvenient impacts of technology in modern society. Firstly, since most of the inventions such as thermal electricity, car, airplane produce a significant figure for carbon dioxide which is main cause of global warming, the rapid development of technology causes some negative environmental problems which destroys the earth’s ecologic balance. Secondly, because modern technologies facilitate some manual work in many factories, the human effort has replaced and automation devices might take away a lot of jobs. This makes modern people slaves of machines which could lead to vanishing of traditional handicrafts such as pottery and dyeing.
However, I agree that rejecting technology is not a good solution to have simpler life. First, as high-tech equipment have some difficult and complex functions that people do not, technology plays a crucial role in people’s survival. For example, CT scan, MRI and ultrasound help doctors detect and cure serious diseases. Additionally, development in technology relieve people of daily routine to save a great deal of spare time to enjoy themselves and perform more important purposes instead of doing the chores such as baking several food items, washing clothes and sweeping floors. Without the help of modern technology, people might to struggle with high pressure from hectic schedule.
In conclusion, while technology makes people more involved in their life, I believe that it plays an indispensable role for them to feel comfortable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48611111111 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92943633183 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8906396151 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302976590516 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108463155406 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774634197439 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182667426534 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773292131094 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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