Some people think drawing and painting are as important as other subjects; they should be made compulsory in high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
creative subjects pavé a way for escape from stress and relaxing minds.People believe subjects such as paintings and drawings should be made mandatory in high grades along with other difficult fields like history, mathematics etc. I, for several reasons agree to this.
Firstly, increasing competition has raised the bar of education. Children face immense stress, burden from parents as well as peer pressure to meet good scores.Adding art subjects in the curriculum not only help them to escape from pressure but also develop minds.This actually acts as a relaxing therapy, acquire ability to think efficiently.
Secondly, with all tough subjects namely chemistry, physics etc creative subjects add colour to the studies.Moreover, builds the learning power and give in out of the box imagination. The level of concentration and dedication towards studies rises.
Thirdly, nowadays students had become bookworm isolating them from the society. Activities like these will expand the interaction; in turn tend to inculcate inter-personal skills. Personal development is also important as bookish knowledge.
Additional reason, some parents are strict and believe these are of no use but not everyone is excellent in studies and no one is born artist.Every skill takes time to flourish.They should understand importance of these fields and encourage their kids; who knows they’ll become future artists.
To summarize, I totally agree that school should put art related subjects under obligation because its benefits.To effectuate these school authorities should take effective measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91983122363 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01928734426 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704641350211 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.3792743008 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170535217552 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496846653818 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550566245283 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073893192672 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631675721493 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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