Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is it good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
Technology is flourishing day-by-day. Single day new gadgets such as phones or laptops are introduced. Some people are ardent to buy. In this essay, I opine the reason whether it is bad or good.
To start with, due to digital advancement and modern influence people are pulled towards recent products. They feel adrenaline rush to buy everything irrespective of their needs and wants. According to me, fondness is fine to some extent, but when this turns to desire, it becomes a problem. Wasting money for materialistic pleasures is egregious.
Secondly, as the living standards are dynamic. Everyone is on a run to stand out in the crowd. For this they are ready to spend huge cash. People’s beliefs are changing, for them reputation is directly proportional to the materials. The values of these commodities are declining.
Thirdly, individuals are more concerned about other’s opinion. they started building a feeling of comparison and desiring more than required. And are persuaded by the thoughts of wanting, which in turn led to raising spending spree also known as impulse buying. Advertising plays a salient role in controlling one's behaviour. Other market strategy like mouth-to-mouth publicity, promotions, offers and discounts attract the buyers.
To end, I believe materialistic happiness is the temporary one and to redeem permanent cheerfulness person should value the things. Not every person is wealthy since one have should use wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55217391304 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0172440761 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708695652174 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.382168698 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.85 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.55 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144639780539 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377873225794 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649050862754 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707661909618 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793801604649 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.73 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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