Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure countries success, while others think that there are other factors, which can be used to measure a countries success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure countries success, while others think that there are other factors, which can be used to measure a countries success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others?

Growth and development is an indispensable part of each nation across the globe. It is often argued by some people a countries success can identify only through economic progress, whilst others opine that there are some other factors. This essay will be discussed the influence of literacy rate and primary healthcare system and find out which one is the most of these.

One the one hand, some people say that economic progression is a yardstick of a nation’s victory because many countries have already proven it. To be more precise, an affluent country constantly emphasis the sign of success through their massive development of information technology, infrastructure and gross development product. Take countries like Australian, Norway and Switzerland are a prime example of a few wealthy nation's.

Opponents, however, think that other factors are to be considered as a sign of countries victory especially high education rate and basic health care are among these. One of the most significant factors of economic progress is being made through stable literacy rate than the health care system. In fact, today, a major proportion of success come to the most nation is from literacy owing to zealous and enthusiastic employees. As a result, those people can work really find a spectacular outcome in society feasibly. For instance, though the GDP is relatively low in Cuba, they find success because the literacy rate is well under 1%.

To conclude, although the economic growth can estimate the rich and poor country, others feel that a stable literacy rate is weighing more significant than other identities.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...be. It is often argued by some people a countries success can identify only through econo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, thus, well, for instance, in fact, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32307692308 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83012900369 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9325460933 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357892174271 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115377633775 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963578728543 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209593044715 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658929923513 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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