Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress, but the quality at work. To what extent you agree or disagree?
It is commonly argued that the higher authorities at companies are not giving attention to the dresses of their delegates, and I fully support this view because they focus on their working speed and behavior to manage with others at work.
Working capacity of employees is one of the major qualities of a worker. Owing to the fact that bosses are giving attention on their abilities to finish their tasks, managers give them time to finish work accordingly, and the staff is completed their tasks in deadline. So, it is one of the significant factor which takes place over the selection of outfits at workplace as well as it raises the productivity more in companies and definitely status of companies progress. Google and Facebook, for example, one of the most popular organizations that never puts dress code to their delegates rather than this, all the people come to offices in their casual wear of their choices.
Moreover, the other thing which is considered crucial is the behavior of the employees. This is because if the worker has upright qualities like to adjust with others, then team-work become easy, for the better working atmosphere at workplace. Not only this is support to the new candidates at the work, but also helped others to cope up with errors in their work; resultantly, the quality of work is flourished and checked work again and the overall development is seen. To cite an example, had my friend, Jackson, never talked with his colleague about new software, he could not have got the promotion.
In conclusion, owing to less time to complete given tasks and the overall personality to manage with co-workers in offices, I am convinced that the given argument is logically sound.
- More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past Why Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 73
- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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- More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past Why Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93949044586 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60884014429 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9291378368 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367647754479 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151506045494 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168886318097 0.0667982634062 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259287003768 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.286875188747 0.056905535591 504% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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