Some people think that English might someday become the only language to be spoken and written in the world, due to globalization. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?
Some people think that globalization will lead to a single language spoken and written in the world and English is the language that is likely to perfect that. This would create certain benefits but there will also be some disadvantages.
Obviously, when English becomes the only language to be used, there will be almost no gap between countries. This means that when the language barrier disappears, conflicts are easier to resolve and understand. Moreover, the trade, exchange of goods, and tourism will also be much more favorable, leading to more developed economies. Scientific research and development are also easier since all scientific articles from all countries are previously required to be presented in English. With the language homogeneity, it is not difficult anymore.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First, it is not easy to be able to write and speak English fluently. Indeed, for countries using the Latin alphabet like Vietnam, English proficiency may take about 5 years, which will be even longer for countries using hieroglyphs such as China, Japan,… Second, language is part of a culture, so if English is used as the only language, thousands of other languages in the world will gradually disappear. This leads to a loss of cultural diversity. All problems in the world will then not be assessed in the most objective way. For example, in the culture of many countries, the forest is a sacred place that needs to be preserved and protected, but in other countries, forests can be freely exploited for human consumption.
In conclusion, using English as a single language has certain advantages in terms of globalization and the development of commerce or tourism. However, its drawback is also something that needs to be carefully considered when it will result in the loss of cultural diversity around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...s using hieroglyphs such as China, Japan,… Second, language is part of a culture, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15309446254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84681981698 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9279446575 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324371723001 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110101958907 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102963570022 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222639285092 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816248678597 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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