Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, environment related issues are clearly something that is often critiqued in today’s world while, some group of people believe that ecological problem is huge so that individual cannot able to reduce it, other, on other hand, believe that, the government is not capable to tackle environment problem without per capita involvement. This essay will discuss both views and finish with reasoned opinion.
To embark on, there are several reasons for those who believe that environment issues are large for individual to decline. To begin with, these days, innovation in industrial area produce large number of toxic gas which is mainly impact on pollution. For this reason, individual cannot do anything to maintain it. In addition to this, some people understand their self and reduce uses of paper, but other side people can utilize more plastic therefore, individual also think that it is useless for one person to mitigate this issue.
However, there are several ways to control ecological issues by government with individual. First and foremost, people can grow plant on their terace because of, if every person can contribute in this method, changes regarding fresh air definitely seen in nearest future. Furthermore, the government impose more public transportation for work people and individual use it carefully for this reason, pollution will decrease, and the government should not import more fossil fuel from other nation.
I believe that individual effort is beneficial for reducing environment problem like compress plastic uses, and also they can help to the government to handle this phenomenon.
By way of conclusion, I retreat that individual can do lot for preserve environment but the government involvement is necessary for encourage people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: impacted
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Suggestion: in the nearest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46376811594 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73102858247 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9935364985 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257885753208 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975824705222 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545491182846 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146670052014 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523896750243 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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