Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that global warming is having a significant impact on our planet. While some people believe that it is the responsibility of the government to protect the ecosystem, others argue that government can do nothing if they are not supported by the people. this essay will discuss both the views.
On the one hand, government is primarily responsible for protecting the environment. this is because, they have the power to introduce laws and impose taxes, which does not lies with the individuals. For example, factories and vehicles are responsible for producing emissions and exhaust fumes. government could introduce certain laws to limit the emissions from factories. similarly, they can also impose "green taxes" on drivers and airline companies. this will help to reduce the excessive use of fossil fuels such as natural gas, oil and coal. Along with that, government can also run campaigns to promote recycling and raising awareness about issues such as climate change and effects of global warming.
On the other hand, individuals should also consider their action and responsibility towards the protection of the environment. The increase in world population has put too much pressure on the natural resources. fossil fuels such as oil and gas are running out. people should try to be greener. this means that, individuals should take public transport rather than driving. similarly, they should use fewer airlines abroad for holidays. In addition, people should try to use products with less packaging, because plastic packaging does not break down easily.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate my opinion that government and individual both have the power to protect the environment at their own level. government should initiate the action of recycling of materials and reusing them, as recycling saves energy and raw materials. individuals should support the government in this initiative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3696369637 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81492808164 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9096389086 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.35 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168910550628 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506565483651 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500956490463 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109128752166 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300589588377 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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