Many people hold a belief that the government should provide free university education systems for all citizens regardless of their financial background. I am of the opinion that it is better to offer such free programmes for only those who are best or special students.
To begin with, there are a variety of reasons why university education should be charged. First of all, it is unfair for those who might not access to university as their parents are all required to pay taxes. Secondly, due to the free educational system, a vast majority of school students tend to study higher education rather than pursuing vocational training, which leads to the lack of mutual workers. In addition, there is no doubt that the cost of studying in the university is not inexpensive. In Vietnam, for example, most of the students need 4 years of studies to accomplish his or her university qualifications. In my opinion, it is better for authority to allocate national revenue to other key sectors such as healthcare or public transportation.
Nevertheless, it seems to me that it is possible to allow qualified students to study in the university for free. For instance, by providing scholarships, a number of students who have excellent grade are able to access the university whether they have sufficient money to pay or not. Consequently, they are enabled to gain knowledge and qualifications, all of which are valuable skills in their next career. This is not likely to benefits those students who perform better educational results but also promotes other students to make best efforts to gain qualifications. As a result, the job market has more potential employees with higher performance.
In conclusion, it seems to me that authority should only make free university education programmes for those who have best educational performance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h his or her university qualifications. In my opinion, it is better for authority ...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...lts but also promotes other students to make best efforts to gain qualifications. As a re...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...sity education programmes for those who have best educational performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0649342933 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5639939533 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3571428571 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268680759119 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948695106013 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550755988802 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17784617518 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257866469602 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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